The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/09
was the poem intertwined in this peice original and written by you? I thought I recognised the first stanza and so I was puzzling this as I read through. An intriguing title that made me want to discover how it fitted into the story!
07/30/09
Diana - The poem is all original :) Any coincidence is just that.
I can see how the “the sprout cut off at the roots in the dawn of its life” could represent the son, if he were not permitted to spread his wings. Good job.

08/01/09
I liked the part, also, about being "cut off before being allowed to live, mature and spread your wings"...neat and unique way of saying how the young lad felt about his own life. Thought this entry was well written...even though I don't know what a "Cotyledon" sprout is? Nicely done, and an enjoyable read.
I feel dusty just reading your essay, felt like I was right there! Good writing!
08/01/09
Really enjoyed this. Good job - good writing.
08/03/09
well I just want to say that the poem was LOVELY and I want to go read some more of your poems!!! I hope you did not mind my questioning its origin.
08/06/09
Congratulations on your third place win. I really liked the "coming of age" feel to this story...and the way you showed the father looking at the cotton, but seeing his son.
Lisa
08/06/09
Well done Matt!
08/06/09
Congrats. Looking forward to reading more of your work.