The Official Writing Challenge
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07/16/09
Loved it! It reminded me of many days spent on southern California beaches.
07/17/09
Some lovely descriptions of the beach. I think it would work well without the first paragraph about death and loss although I can see how you connected it. I enjoyed the observations of life on the beach very much!
Being at the beach does seem like a time for life. We all forget our true age when we are at the beach. Beaches somehow carry us back to our younger sillier carefree days if we have a fantastic imagination and the heart of a child. Everything fit together like a jig-saw puzzle. Beautifully.
07/25/09
This story has everything that summer at the beach contains. It made me see all the things that are mundane, surprising, and fun while basking on the beach in the summer. Very picturesque!