The Official Writing Challenge
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Well packed
07/10/09
I really enjoyed this.
Very cute and colorful.
07/11/09
I wonder if this would be even more powerful if it were in poetry form. The piece offers so much in so few words.
07/11/09
Very unusual and has a hint of Dr. Seuss's flavor to it!
07/12/09
An interesting take on how life seems to be in some places. I especially liked your last paragraph.
07/13/09
Very interesting. Please don't take this wrong, but it reminded me somewhat of Dr. Seuss's books. (I mean that as a compliment). There is a poetic quality to this, gets the point across, without naming who the red, green, or blue people represent (which is all of us).

Very well done.
What a unique entry! I enjoyed this.
07/14/09
I'm not sure how this ties in with twilight years--sorry.
Quite unique, but I don't see the topic either. The last line shows these people are way beyond twilght! Creative writing, though.