The Official Writing Challenge
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Great article! It flowed really well. Even though I saw the end coming, I thought the way you delivered it was clever. Good job!
You have a knack for painting "character" not just characters, simply by telling their story. I felt like I was inside the MC and even the girl. Well done.
good story thanks
I loved this story. It flowed beautifully and the ending was frosting on the cake. Thanks for sharing.
All I can say is: oh yay! Love it!
One little thing. "Got a live for you Randy." should read: "Got a live one for you, Randy." Commas can be so frustrating.
The comma! Of course! Thank you and thank you everyone for the feedback and encouragement. Much appreciated!