The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
I especially like your usage of 'slithered' to describe darkeness.

FYI--Usually we catch this before the entries are posted, but you're not supposed to include your name on your entries. Names are added to the entries automatically once they are judged.

You've captured all of Scripture in this one poem--good job!
06/01/09
Good description of how man fell and was redeemed by he One Great Light!