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TITLE: Come My Beloved! | Previous Challenge Entry
By Cindy Tuttle
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She had nowhere to turn
Where was she to go
Who could she depend on?
She had been hurt
Her heart seemed to be
damaged to a point of dispair
She weeped but felt no one listened
This was before she met
someone she had only read about
Someone in the Holy Book
One day as she cried she heard a voice
I hear your cry, my child
I know your in pain
Your heart is in many pieces
and you feel it can never be healed
Come to me in your tears
Come to me in your pain
Let me slowly put each piece
together again
I will have others help me
I will work through them
You have many feelings
to explore and work on
You have many thoughts
about yourself to discover
Come to me in prayer
Come to me so you will live
After you do these things
You can have a joy
you have never known
A love you have never felt
After you heal
what a life we will have!
Oh, there still will be the cross
But you will know you aren't alone
So, come to me my beloved
I long to have you know
I dwell within you
Come my beloved!
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Check your spelling--dispair/despair, and weeped/wept stood out for me.
I really liked your first few stanzas, and would have liked to read more about this woman, to get to know her life better.