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Topic: India (02/12/09)
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TITLE: Swarming Sea | Previous Challenge Entry
By Marlene Austin
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South Asia, large area, land varied…
Republic, President, Vice-President, Prime Minister…
Enormous population, growing, overstraining, over a billion…
Poverty, glaring, sharp separation…
Family, close-knit, privacy nonexistent, comments forthright…
Weather, warm, humid, close…
Smells, odorous, garbage, urine, incense burning…
Taste, curry, spicy…
Sounds, incessant, horns honking, for every reason, they love the honking, draining…
Sights, stunning, steeped in history…
Occupations, diverse, farming, crafts, industries, services…
Literacy, reading, writing, average schooling, ten years…
Health, high risk infections, diarrhea, hepatitis, typhoid, malaria, rabies, dirt fills the air…
Language, Hindi, English important, politics, commerce…
Religions, Hindu, Muslim, Christian…
Travel, dangerous, walking across traffic in a group, driving, chaos, larger car rules…
Cows, harmless, loose, everywhere, also bulls and donkeys, carts…
Natural resources, stressed, depleted,…
Life, inefficient, crowded, long lines, service to others…
Land full of contradictions, many frustrations, lush with appeal, unique, true feelings of a love/hate relationship…
So many people, constantly moving, pushing, crowding, no end, swarming sea…
INDIA
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I'd have liked a bit more emotional content.
Your title fits the poem (and its subject) perfectly.