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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Countdown to Christmas/Advent (10/23/08)
in todays world there are wise men who are'nt so wise.who are they?men who tell the world a stoy of christianity but leave out our and their creator GOD and his son which is why we celebrate Christmas.The gifts are given and received people decorate and take this day off work yet do they really know why they celebrate and for whom? some do but alot dont.there are wise men who tell the real stoy and some who do'nt,which are tou?my family tells the story of how our saviour was born and how poor the shepards and mary were and the place Christ was born and how we are blessed to have what we have and things that are given to us as well as giving our selves.everyone wants and exspects really nice gifts and gives the best they can which is what God did when Jesus Christ our saviour was born, Be wise and remember why we celebrate christmas.
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Phyllis Inniss 
10/31/08
There are some grammatical mistakes that need to be corrected. There are people on Faithwriters who can help you with this.
Marlene Austin
11/01/08
The grammatical errors in capitalization, contractions, and spacing made this very difficult to read. Your message seemed sincere, work on improving the way it's presented so readers will be able to enjoy it more. :)