The Official Writing Challenge
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A quiet, simple story but Laurel's thoughts echo profoundly. Nicely done!
This is a great approach to this difficult topic. I was hooked from beginning to end.
Very good story. Good descriptions here. Shows lots of internal thinking. Nicely done. Good ending.
What a great (last) line! I'll remember that.
Easy to follow story, and the last line, unexpectedly, sent chills through me.
Very well written. Complete, realistic details and emotions. Good job. :)
Well written story. Ivy sounds like a woman that young girls could learn from. Nice job.