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Most excellent! :D
Oh, I loved this!! What a great allegory.
Cute story...good representation of Matthew 7:15.
Awesome allegory, and it would make a great picture book for children. Very well done.
What a great story. I could hear myself reading this to a class of children. I hope there is more to come. Good job!
Love this allegory. :) Perfect picture of the sinner coming before God. Thank you for this enjoyable read. :)
I loved this! I could see pictures as I read. Wonderful!
Glad you entered this in "Friday Fiction." A very creative allegory.
I loved this this time around too, Sherri! Good job and congrats on placing with it!!
Sherri, I'm planning to feature this delightful allegory in the Front Page Showcase for the week of November 3. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page, and congratulations!
I loved this beautiful written story, and the message within. I agree, this would make a wonderful children's book. And parents could talk to them about it's meaning. Great job!
Loved this, very, very creative. The message is wonderful. Thank you.
Incredible allegory! Liked it much!
Yes, a great fable. Well told
I like your name choice "Baleful". :) Congrats on being the Homepage Author this week!