The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great piece about an all too common problem. I loved the way you took the topic, and made it your own. Very unique and culturally rich.
I had to go on-line & find a picture of the Charade! Great story telling. I was suspicious of those people from the beginning.
Well done--I knew something was up, but I wasn't sure what it was. Good job building tension.

I'd have liked to know these two people better, maybe through more dialogue, and more "showing" than "telling".

Loved the ending!
I'm embarrassed to admit to being in the dark--but I know it's me. LoL I'll have to do some research to understand the significance, but I DID enjoy the story.
Unique slant on the topic. I had never heard of a car named the Charade. Thanks for new info. :)