The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/08
A thought-provoking article, good for new Christians to read.

I'd encourage you to avoid starting an entry with a definition (or two). Most people know what those words mean, and there are far more compelling "hooks" to draw readers in. Try something short, or shocking, or action-filled, to make them want to read on.

Thanks for sharing your heart-felt thoughts with us!
08/24/08
Your fourth paragraph is a synopsis of the sermon I heard in church this morning. God must be nudging me.
Love is the best thing to keep us from making a mess of things, as you rightly say - our lives, without God to bail us out, would be one continual bad mess.
Thanks for sharing your thought provoking piece.
"You are loved, forgiven, and free. Don't let Satan turn your life into a travesty." Great truth, succinctly put. Excellent devotional for everyone, not just youth. :)
08/26/08
A good reminder for us to fight Satan's charade by listening to God.