The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the poem, especially "Him who cleaneses our wounds shallow or deep." Good job!
Good message. Nice form having the last word always begin the next line. :)
08/18/08
Very nice meaning and use of words and repetition.
08/19/08
So much in so few words, it was beautiful and a pleasure to read.