The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved the double meaning of this hear! The dialouge was simply wonderful too! I liked the "Paw" and "Memory" as a bucking bronco. Neat! ^_^
Good job, I could sense the excitement of the son and the joy of winning over both Memories.
I loved the double meaning in here. Fantastic idea!
Your name, Helen, means "light". You are certainly lighting the way for all to see your creativity with this poignant story.
Congratulations, Helen. I loved your parallel of the ride on Memory and the man's lost son. Good dialect, good parallel. A stunner.