The Official Writing Challenge
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This was fun! I was a bit confused in the first sentence with "our people" but quickly recovered (smile)
05/22/08
How cute!! This was such a fun read. The things that only children know.... :)
05/23/08
Your title intrigued me. I have a Sparky in my family, too. Only he is a cat. He has more personality - or shall I say "catonality" in his tail than any cat I have ever known, and I have known lots. I think he would be a good watch-cat, too, given a chance...Your story was cute, giving the credit of understanding his pet to the little owner of the dog. Of course he would KNOW that his dog would protect the house, and he would understand that it WAS the dog who chased a burgler away. Kids and dogs understand each other's language. They don't need words! Very cute...Helen
Cute story. It's fun to try and get inside the head of an animal and figure out what they are thinking. You brought Sparky to life and gave him his own unique personality. This was some good writing. Thank you for sharing. :)
05/24/08
Love the faith that boy had in Sparky - and what a sweet little dog. Enjoyed this from the doggy's point of view. Nice job!
05/26/08
I really liked the way you used the puppy's perspective to bring the story to life. Loved the outcome.
Congratulations on taking 14th place in your level with this piece, Judy!