The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/05
good advice and well written
Kathy
01/24/05
Good story. Excellent truths. Only one thing....you said, I felt convection....I think you meant conviction.
Great job! I liked this perspective very much. Well written.
01/25/05
Thank you, Alice! Yes, I did mean conviction...not convection.
01/25/05
Good food for thought ... all these reality shows on at the moment are about desire, aren't they? That's the way God's wired us. But how empty most of what we see on TV reality shows is ... it is only God that satisfies the desire as we centre our lives on Him.
01/27/05
Thanks for your honesty. I know I have gotten caught up myself in a TV show or two or twenty...
Your piece is well written, flows smoothly, and your points are clearly made. It held my interest throughout, probably because I could relate to it so well! Great job!
Blessings, Lynda
Amen, Amen, Amen. God bless you for your honesty. We need more of it. Good job.