The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed reading your memories of childhood and seeing the tenderness of your feeling for your siblings. The last line of your poem says it all.
05/09/08
It was great to round off such a memoir with a prayer of thanks.

Who was Warpy of the Indians?
05/09/08
Lovely and nostalgic, a very pleasant read.

Take a quick look through your paragraphs for cliches; I found a few here and there.

I like the poem at the end--it's a fitting ending for this heart-warming entry.
05/10/08
I enjoyed reading about your childhood. Good writing. I, too, grew up during WWII and had 3 brothers. My older brother delighted in tormenting me but I adored my 2 younger brothers. Those really were wonderful times. Like you, I have many happy memories to look back on.