The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow that was tough,wonderful slant on the topic. I'd like to meet Auntie Pearl one day.
Well delivered, keep writing.
I appreciated this article very much. Thank you!
04/26/08
I need a tissue after that one. This is a great story and I really enjoyed it.
04/29/08
JAMbo (Swahili greeting)

You blessed my heart! Your love flows forth in your writings. God has gifted you!
04/30/08
Wonderful story...wonderful ending!
This story is especially meaningful for me just now, so soon after seeing the African Children's Choir from several countries in Africa, and the Watoto Children's Choir from Uganda. The purpose and mission of both of these wonderful Christian choirs is to raise money to care for and educate as many children in their homelands as possible.
The ending gave me goosebumps. This is bittersweet, to see endings, but also new beginnings. I love "Pearl" both the aunt and the ending paragraph with the little baby girl. It shows the changes and in a way, a gift that the Aunt passed down. Thanks for sharing and congrats on your EC! ^_^
05/01/08
This story is beautiful. Congrats on your EC!
05/01/08
Oh so sad, yet hope-filled, too. Love the character of Aunt Pearl. Congratulations on your EC!
05/01/08
Congratulations on your EC. This is beautiful.
Beautiful entry, Julia, contratulations on your EC placement. Well-deserved. Loren
05/01/08
Julie, you deserved to be in EC. Congratulations! I loved your well-told story. It gave me goose bumps, as you carried me along with you in your last days with your auntie....May the Lord continue to bless you...Helen
05/02/08
What a beautiful ending, and this was a stellar line--"There He was all the time - living inside my Auntie Pearl’s heart!"
Congratulations on your EC! Your story is heartwarming and beautiful.
05/02/08
Yes, this is a lovely, touching story; and our title was so "perfect"! I add my congratulations on your level win and your EC! Well done! :)
Very special!