The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/08
An interesting approach to the gospel story...I had to really stretch to find a connection to "Actions speak louder than words", but I like your originality, and the last line was super.
An wonderful article honoring the great Teacher. A heartful thought.
02/29/08
Inspiring! He teaches by doing for others--and gave us the great example by laying down his life for us--the students. Looking forward to another lesson! :)
02/29/08
A clever and interesting take on the topic. Enjoyed the read.
The beginning was a bit bland, if you don't mind a spot of criticism. However, I liked how the emotion picked up as it went along, especially the part where you were talking about songs about the Teacher.