The Official Writing Challenge
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Good job--setting, characterization, topic relevance--it's all here.
You write well. This is a good story. A couple of tiny typos, though. Keep writing.
Nice job with the topic. Thank God for friends who remind us of the Word at critical moments.
I wish we could have experienced the reaction of the thief.
I was wondering where this was going - and it didn't disappoint.

I had trouble in a few places figuring out who was saying what. A few more dialog tags might help.

Keep writing.
Very creative and well done example of the Topic this week. A nice, fast-paced illustration...telling it like it is. I liked it! Good job!
Congratulations on placing 1st this week! I enjoyed your story. Anger can drive us to do really stupid things that we will always end up regretting later on. I'm glad that Riule had a friend to stop him from doing something that could have possibly ruined his life. Thank you for sharing.