The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! Gripping. I was a little lost at times, but not enough to stop me from reading and finding out what happened. That's one of the challenges with the word count. Good job.
Lots of great atmosphere and suspense in this story.

I was confused a bit by the narrator; it's not until nearly the end that she's revealed as female, so that was a bit disorienting. And not all of the action/motivations were clear...

Nevertheless, very strong writing and a story that gripped me to the end.
This held me to the end, also. You were dealing with word limits here and I think if you could expand it beyond the 750 word limit imposed by the challenge most of the confusion would disappear. Good job!