The Official Writing Challenge
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This precious story made me smile. What a loving mom not to dismiss his concern.
01/25/08
Oh, how precious!
Cool story! Smart young boy. You told this in a very enjoyable manner.

Red Pen: Watch your quotation marks.
01/28/08
What a sweet story. Noah is a very smart child. I like this alot, good job.
01/30/08
Sweet story, but unless Noah was a genius, he wouldn't say "make an eye appointment for me", or "need to have my eyes checked". Four year olds would normally say - "take me to the doctor, Momma, so he can fix my eyes"...but otherwise a cute story and handles the topic of the week very well.