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Wonderful ending!

If she's that debilitated from Lou Gehrig's Disease, could she have given her walker a good kick, from her bed?

A few typos and comma splices to clean up, but this is a good story. I like reading about people who come to terms with disabilities.
I like the husband's words of advice, excellent message.
It was very relatable. I understand better then before. You brought me into life life of the story. What a gift.
I enjoyed this. The dialogue was real, pulled me into the story. Your approach to the topic was creative and edifying. Thanks!
Could identify with the bitterness and loved this part. Somewhere in the back of Marissa’s mind she knew her anger toward Brian was unmerited. But right now she had to concentrate on walking, and with each forced step she felt her bitter rage rising again.
Keep up the good words and congratulations.