The Official Writing Challenge
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Ooh, how my heart aches for this mother. Thanks for the courage to tell this tale. Send this off, many people need to hear this message.
Powerful story. Good choice in seperating the periods of time with the one sentence paragraphs. You made the story easy to follow and the sections flowed well. Nice work!
Oh, excellent, just excellent!
Great format - great story - excellent writing - and a powerful message - you pretty much have the whole package here.
How I wish I could write this on the heart of every young mother in the world, starting with my own daughter! What a great story.
Congratulations, Jim, on placing first in your level. By the way, your entry also was 39th overall. Great job!
This article has a powerful impact. The short sentences between paragraphs helped maintain the emotion and move the piece along. I wonder how it would affect people who have tried to raise their children the "right way" but still have them turn out badly?