The Official Writing Challenge
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beautiful story! I want to read more.
Great account of triumph in the face of tragedy. Your title was what peaked my interest and you held me captive. You are a wonderful storyteller, with the ability to weave different aspects within a lifetime to create a special moment for the reader. If this is a true story, hooray for standing strong in such difficult times; if it is a creatively made up story, wonderful! Very nicely done.
I love the imagery, like the crushed eggshells clinging to the son's pants. A touching story, gently told.
Great job! Pulled me right into the moment.
Well done!

The scene was very real and alive. The characters had depth and emotion. Those are the markings of a great story .... and this is one! Great work!
Wow! Neat story. So glad I read it. Your writing made it very real.
Well written and very interesting story!
Top notch, well done!
Hi Christie. Just popping in very quickly to let you know that you were in the semi-finals for the Valentine Challenge and did very well. So give yourself a pat on the back - you deserve it. Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)