The Official Writing Challenge
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This is lovely - your descriptions and imagery captivated me. Much truth here as well. A wonderful piece.
Beautiful descriptions that paint a lovely picture of our lives. Well done. Christmas blessings! :)
I hope you will share this with Michelle's family--it is a lovely tribute to her.

FYI--it's "stained glass".

This entry has some wonderful imagery.
I like this. The descriptions are lovely. One thing I might do different is not tell the reader you are using an analogy. It's just a personal opinion, but I think it makes the piece stronger if you don't have to point out the analogy. Nevertheless, this is a very good piece.
Hi Ken,
Truly a beautiful piece of work. How sad we do not always reveal the true person for fear of rejection. What a lovely tribute to Michele. She was one in a million. Lov Norms
How I hope that the colors of Christ shine through me! The beautiful thing about 'The Church' is that I get to meet Michelle someday!!! Nice writing. Thank you for sharing.
A wonderful tribute to a friend. Your heart is evident, and lesson clear. Watch tenses in the first paragraph, and you may have included a little too much. Analogies work best when they are limited, I think, but maybe that's a poet's opinion.
Congratulations, Kenneth, on placing 14th in your level. Great work!