The Official Writing Challenge
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We've all been there. Loved your account! Praise God He seeks us out while we are yet sinners.
Wonderful and powerful descriptions. I love the pipe organ as it resounds it's own language of praise (so it seems). I imagine someone never having experienced the awe of a church service like this would indeed feel like an alien. Good analogy! Christmas blessings! :)
I like the easy, informal style of this. Many of us can relate to it, too. Well done.
Excellent telling of the church experience from an outsider's POV. It's good for us to see ourselves from a fresh set of eyes.

Try to limit your use of exclamation points--rely on your strong writing and good word choice to convey emotion. And writing as fresh as this deserves a creative, unique title.

This is a very strong entry.
Wow, what a great article. Although I understand why you put your 'thoughts' into parenthesis and made it work, I would love to see them included in the sentences, it would make the story flow smoother. You are such a strong writer, I know you could do it. I really enjoyed your description of someone going to church for the first time. Great job. Keep writing for Him!
Great job, especially on topic, I would have loved some more background on your MC. Keep up the good words!
Boy! Do I remember the day this happened to me! Thanks for the reminder.