The Official Writing Challenge
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You know what? This was great -- loved it!
Your article intrigued me. Your character sounded like an old soul in a young man's body. You managed to paint a colorful picture of one moment in time where the seed of love could be planted. I loved your response when Olivia introduced herself; you said, "I'm in trouble". That spoke volumes of men who are smitten. This was wonderfully done.
I liked this story! Good job!
Yesh, wish I had a vote, this one is a winner.