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By Symantha McClennan
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All About Jesus
We are in the secret place behind the sanctuary up the narrow stairs to the dressing room painted Pepto-Bismol pink. From a drawer in a small worn dresser a small book is drawn and I sign my name in it and put the date. The water is warm; I am surprised, it feels like a bath. I wear my purple swimsuit under a white t-shirt under a white robe. People cheer as I am introduced, standing in the water, next to the pastor in hip waders, like fishermen wear, a white shirt and tie all the congregation can see. The congregation gazes up at us from our window in the wall; a glue-on mural of a river in the background.
I have accepted Jesus many years before and again many years after. I do not understand the pomp and circumstance. I do not understand things that look like what they are not. I return to a pew, wet hair clinging to my face. People who never spoke to me before and never have again, offer congratulatory hugs. I have joined the club.
I want only Jesus. Later, as before, I learn that my relationship is with Jesus. I learn that the better I know Jesus…reading the Bible…the more I want to be like Him and I know it is not possible. “Thank you, Jesus,” I say. I am yours.
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I felt another message in the middle, a subtle but one that needs us to think about it a lot.
Your ending had yet another message. When it's all said and done, when all the fanfare is over, it IS all about Jesus.
There is a lot of good stuff in this short piece. Well done.
I wonder if this is why so many people get baptized a second time after they understand the beauty and significance of it?
Well done.