The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/07
Nice object lessons, and you've written a tidy and well-oganized essay here.

I wonder if you'd consider taking this to another level, and stretching for more gardening lessons? The ones presented here, while beautifully written, are ones that many of us may be familiar with already.

I admire people who have the patience to garden...how blessed you are!
Nice essay.

I like how you compare your Christian life to gardening.

I would like to see a little more of the writer's feelings and specific experiences.

Good job.
09/11/07
I like the analogy to gardening. Your article presents many good points about the Christian walk. I agree with Kristen that a bit more personal experience would make this entry shine!
Reminds me of the song--In The Garden.
You might want to put a space between paragraphs--makes it easier to read.
I like the story and the comparisons to Christ in our lives--God is the true gardener.