The Official Writing Challenge
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I would love to meet Lilly. She would make a great friend for my daughter.
What a beautiful mesh of thoughts. I can totally see my own dd coming up with all those names for herself. Makes me think of all my "names" and the personalities that come with them.
Lilly has a lot of character AND spunk. You did a good job of describing her using her thoughts!! I also like how you used her name and the reference to the new name God give us. This was well-written.
Smart. Bible teaching disguised. What a learning tool!
Such a sweet story. It's an easy read with a wonderful message. This one is a definite keeper!