The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/07
This powerful poem is a beautiful portrait of Jesus in His dual roles as Lion and Lamb! Excellent job! :)
05/07/07
This is marvelous! I'd love to hear it set to music and sung as an actual hymn.
This is a powerful, God-honoring poem. I hope to see more of your work.
Wonderful, encouraging tribute to the Lord.
05/09/07
So powerful and stirring. Excellent!
05/12/07
There's a lot to take in David but I was particularly touched by: 'He came to restore us but not to condemn./He weeps with our anguish, brings balm to our pain'. I can see that a lot of your heart has gone into this. Thanks. Yeggy