The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/05
What! Giving thanks without the sacrificial turkey in the midst?! This is a profound account of what the true meaning of being thankful is all about. I sounds as if this was the most meaningful thanksgiving you had ever experienced. May we take this memory with us into all our future Thanksgivings and make them more than a time of feasting. Good account. Thanks.
05/01/05
Well told story. Puts thngs into perspective. In final sentence 'is what we experienced' needs rewording though, sounds clumsy
05/04/05
Hi Ellen. I just wanted to leave a quick note to explain why your other entry, "The Walk of Thanksgiving" had to be removed. We only allow one entry per member per Challenge, so I had to pull the last entry. I thought you may have wanted to know what happened. I hope you'll keep rising to the Challenge! With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)