The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the flow and the repititon in this. Nice job.
03/17/07
Perfect example of the transition of becoming a Christian. Nice article.
03/17/07
A New Song brings you to the point where your life has changed. You have managed to tell this sincerely and briefly in your poem of blank verse. Good job.
Enjoyed reading here about the conflict the soul has in trying to tune in to God.
Nice free-verse poem. What a difference a day can make. I noticed you had one extra long line, and wondered if you might possibly make a line break somewhere to shorten it and make two lines. Otherwise, I enjoyed reading this piece. God bless
I love a song by Third Day, a praise and worship group. Your last stanza reminded me of that song. Nice Poem.
03/22/07
There will be so many who can relate to your well developed message. Nicely done.