The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a wonderful story, well told.
Loved the story, loved the dialect and Mike's very evident frustration.

You might have left off the last two sentences; you made your point beautifully without them and consequently they are a bit anti-climactic.

This one had great island flavor, just what I needed on this frosty evening!
I enjoyed this article very much. It is interesting how communication can be misunderstood. I found myself waiting to find out what the native was talking about. You did an excellent job.
You held my attention to the end and drew my curiosity!Evidence of good writing!
Congratualtions, Gary ..Didn't I tell you!

You'll be in advanced real soon!