The Official Writing Challenge
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Enjoyed the old-fashioned story-telling!
03/22/05
I loved the illustration of the sheep dog. Good transition to the lesson of your story too. Your dialog was nice and smooth, quite believable. Well done.
03/23/05

Well written and would make a good teaching lesson for children.

Kathy
03/24/05
Very nice - well done.
Writing from a child's view seems easy but I know it isn't. It's often hard to keep the adult voice and the child's voice realistic. To find an ending that sums up things but isn't so surgary kids will groan. I think you succeeded very well here. The correlations were excellent and the tone just right. Great job.
03/26/05
What a beautiful illustration of how the Holy Spirit leads and how He focuses on the ones others follow knowing their influence. Sadly the enemy also focuses on them. But God is greater. This would make a great story for a children's book like the series done by Max Lucado. But, like a parable, it's meaning is rich and significant for all ages. Thanks!