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Topic: Garden (09/07/06)
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TITLE: In the garden of my Lord | Previous Challenge Entry
By Gerald W. White Jr.
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In the garden of my Lord
My soul is so peaceful
`In the garden of my Lord
My blessings are so bountiful
In the garden of my Lord
His works make me useful
In the garden of my Lord
In the garden of my Lord
His love makes me joyful
In the garden of my Lord
Of my needs, He is mindful
In the garden of my Lord
His word keeps me fruitful
In the garden of my Lord
In the garden of my Lord
His Spirit keeps me youthful
In the garden of my Lord
For my redemption I am grateful
In the garden of my Lord
My faith keeps me hopeful
In the garden of my Lord
In the garden of my Lord
His gifts are delightful
In the garden of my Lord
His presence is so meaningful
In the garden of my Lord
My life is so blissful
In the garden of my Lord
In the garden of my Lord
Thinking of Him makes me cheerful
In the garden of my Lord
Of my blessings, I am thankful
In the garden of my Lord
Of God’s Grace, my soul is full
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One thing I didn't get was the layout. The title is repeated too much. If you reformatted and regouped this poem it would be easier to read.
Overall, the message was a very nice one. :)