The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/06
What I liked about it - EVERYTING - wow. Great third paragraph and great ending!
What I might change- I wanted more. Great style of writing! P.S. your title caught my eye.
This is awesome. I'd like to see it expanded as I was left wanting to read more!
Beautiful work! I especially enjoyed the ending. I do think "learnt" should be "learned", but other than that, I loved it!