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Oh, that every time of communion would be like this: a true visual remembrance of the cost He paid to redeem us! You used your words with such economy and yet each sentence pierced my soul and found its mark.

This is simply beautiful!
I wrote a comment and I think somehow it got lost in cyberspace, so if I repeat myself please forgive me.

Oh, that each time we took communion we would reflect as deeply as you expressed in this article! You used your words to great effect; I will not receive the elements again without reflecting on the great cost He bore to redeem me! Beautiful piece!
A beautiful piece with a beautiful title. It touched me deep within.
08/30/06
Too often Communion is just another routine. This is a great reminder, one that we should take to the table with us every time we celebrate the Lord's Supper. Good job.
08/30/06
What I like - How you mingled truths with her thougths. I liked the layout and the clear way you described the Lord's supper. I like your word choices and how it flowed. Good beginning paragraph.
What I might change - really nothing as this is just the length this piecse needed to tell what it did.
I love the way you interspersed Scripture -- that made it that much more powerful!
08/31/06
Beautiful! What better reflection of the Cross as it is memorialized in the Lord's Supper! Nice work! :)