The Official Writing Challenge
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Very inspiring. Great entry.
07/14/06
You did it! You got your entry in and ministered your point. Nice story. I would have liked to read a lil more about your main character. But your feet are wet, you proved your obedience and I look forward to reading more from you. God Bless.
07/14/06
You did it! You got your entry in and ministered your point. Nice story. I would have liked to read a lil more about your main character. But your feet are wet, you proved your obedience and I look forward to reading more from you. God Bless.
07/14/06
I'd look for a way to change a couple of those "average" words in the first paragraph, but otherwise this is a good piece. Congratulations.
Wow!!! The tears are still in my eyes. This is very well written. Thanks for sharing, and keep writing.
07/17/06
This is quite good, I think! I love the way you "sandwich" your story with the question about looking in the mirror - it works quite well - with me, anyway!! Great job!