The Official Writing Challenge
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06/26/06
This article makes some good points, but watch use of commas and words (i.e. cloths s/b clothes). Relating life to morphing is a good analogy, as we do 'morph' for different occasions. You wrapped this up nicely.
06/26/06
I like this. Maybe blank spaces between paragraphs would be easier on the readers' eyes. Good piece. Thanks.