The Official Writing Challenge
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I needed to read this one. It really hit home with my current dillema. Great story, but try to space out the paragraphs so it is an easier read. good job!
05/15/06
Great testimony of God being with you in good times and bad. From a technical point of view, I'd be inclined either to make this prose (take out the rhymes and package it into paragraphs), or to be really brutal and force it into a meter. Keep writing!
05/16/06
You certainly have quite a story to tell, and you are very expressive. That's the gift of God, a creative writer's heart! Keep writing and developing that talent! God bless you!