The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/06
What a wonderful experience. Good story, keep at it.
What an awesome "purpose". Thanks for sharing this experience. I could almost see the snow falling in the train station and the people following you...
04/17/06
Lots of potential here. Great title. A friend of Israel is a friend of God. Blessings!
04/17/06
Interesting story, but separating the paragraphs with double spacing would make it much easier for the Reader to enjoy the read. Thank you for this story of the Trail To Freedom.
04/18/06
I relish your first paragraph. It paints a picture of foreign intrigue and I just love it! Great bait to capture your reader, you must know a lot about catching fish! You caught me, and I read this through as if I were walking right alongside, feeling every step. Another addition to my 'favorites' list!
A compelling and moving story...share it often!
04/19/06
Beautifully expressed.This story will be a blessing to all who read it.