The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/06
This is good--I wanted so much more! I hope you will tell "the rest of the story" some time.
03/16/06
Definitely needs to be expanded. Nice job.
Thanks for sharing! Next time please expand. You have both the talent and the extra room.
03/18/06
These few words say it all! No need to expand something this beautifully expressed...I loved it AS IS! Short, sweet and to the point! Kudos, my friend, for a job well done!