The Official Writing Challenge
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Your message is clear and good to reflect on. Your opening sentence tells your reader what they are in for. We don't get a full understanding of the topic until paragraph three. Keep writing I can't wait to see what you write next.
06/08/18
Fantastic job with the topic which you nailed perfectly well. I enjoyed reading this piece which was interesting and filled with truths,

Blessings~
06/08/18
Good job creating a sense of nostalgia in the piece and bringing forth worthy qualities to strive for.
It must be wonderful to belong to such a family. You made a good point about the relationship between honesty and respect. I loved your observation about how we think we're connected through all of our technical devices, but we're really disconnected. You also posed some good questions to make us think. There's perhaps a little bit of repetition in the first few paragraphs, so you could maybe tighten that up a little. But you did a great job overall. Your piece made me think. Well done.
08/06/18
A challenge.real connection is when we take our time to personally be with our families and refuse the social media fake connection. This is awake up call.keep it up.