The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/18
This would make a great devotional. Nice job!
05/11/18
Beautifully said.
Blessings~
This is a great mini-sermon. I liked the verse you chose for your message and it fits perfectly. I did notice you switched your voice from first person singular to the universal you and then to first person plural. You did a great job of writing on topic without overusing the topic word. Your message is perfect for today's world. I can relate as I always have noise in my background. You made me realize I need to turn off the TV in order to better hear God speak to me.
05/17/18
Congrats!
Blessings~