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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: STORM (10/05/17)
There are anumber of practical and helpful ways taught by our Lord Jesus to overcome storms such as marital problems and many afflictions that we face in our everyday life.Its amazing to understand that with GOD we are capable of overcoming all obstacles.We are aware of how to use our faith which motivates us to face the diverse situations.

Mark4;35-41 is awonderful account of astorm and how Jesus dealt with the disciples who were with Him.Here Jesus made it clear that we can overcome harsh times by remembering His promise.The disciples were scared,they had to wake Jesus up so that He could handle the situation.He arose and rebuked the storm meaning we can stay come in times when its realy tough and glorify God.It could be having to talk nicely to people to have caused us so much pain,forgiving arelative who stabbed our back or helping people who folded their hands when we needed their assistance.

Jesus calls us to make up our minds that no matter what comes our way we will trust and obey that He is with us to bring us through every situation.W e become more strong in our faith.When we are calm,at peace&loving even in times when it seems too difficult we become usable vessels in God’s powerful hands,to reach out to the broken hearted,the deeply hurt,those who have given up hope and we spread Jesus message of salvation worldwide.There a lot of news lives waiting to be born of God when we decide to hold on till our last breath.
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Sherry Brock
10/12/17
A wonderful message is conveyed in your words. I suggest you improve by placing a space between paragraphs next time and by reviewing a few of the grammar lessons offered on this site. Both would improve the flow of your entry and deliver a cleaner message to the reader. Keep writing!
Larry Whittington
10/13/17
You have presented good thoughts, thoughts from your heart.

I don't know if you had a "spell checker" when you wrote your original draft but it left many spaces out so some of the words were not spaced like you meant them to be. When you copy your work, you can preview it and work on it so it will be like you want it. This takes a little learning but will be easy when you see how to do it.
Noel Mitaxa 
10/13/17
Brief and encouraging material, though it looks more rushed than it needs to be. Para breaks will enhance your clarity and bring your readers with you. Keep right on developing your writing ministry, as you have great potential.