The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 533 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
I'm not a poetry person, but I really enjoyed this. I particularly liked the way you used the end phrases such as, 'I savour', 'I dream', 'I dot a period.' They put me in your space.
I didn't understand what 'the rod' was. Did you mean the pencil? Perhaps that could have been clearer.
You caught the moment of a writer, deliberating over their words, with style.

Thanks for the read
This is beautiful. I loved the imagery. You created a wonderful mental picture. I felt like I was right inside your brain. This is a favorite for me this week. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Haha. I can relate for sure! The entry flowed smoothly. I enjoyed.
06/05/17
I think this is something most writers can relate to. The blank page, what to write, mind drifting.
06/08/17
Your poem created a mood with the mastery of your words. I could relate well to the theme.

I look forward to reading more of your work.
06/08/17
Congratulations on your 1st place win in the beginners category, Eneida. Your poem was creative and well thought out.