The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/17
Excellent!

Well done,
Blessings~
I appreciate the focus on the gospel message!
Your writing got me thinking about how there can be even be disagreement between believers based on how each person receives and interprets a message. However, there is one ultimate truth and I appreciated that, in closing your piece, you brought that truth to the surface of your writing. I liked that you started each segment with a question, it sort of gave a certain rhythm to your writing. I did not clearly see the resolution of the conflict between the two sides but perhaps this is where the
"truth" comes in? Through the truth peace will come to both sides perhaps? This was very interesting, left me questioning things and I enjoyed what it sparked in me. Thanks! Good work.
Your writing got me thinking about how there can be even be disagreement between believers based on how each person receives and interprets a message. However, there is one ultimate truth and I appreciated that, in closing your piece, you brought that truth to the surface of your writing. I liked that you started each segment with a question, it sort of gave a certain rhythm to your writing. I did not clearly see the resolution of the conflict between the two sides but perhaps this is where the
"truth" comes in? Through the truth peace will come to both sides perhaps? This was very interesting, left me questioning things and I enjoyed what it sparked in me. Thanks! Good work.
05/17/17
This type of poetic verse brought a lot of pertinent questions to light.

I would leave off the word perhaps on the one stanza.
05/18/17
Congratulations on winning 2nd place in the Beginners category, Katherine.