The Official Writing Challenge
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You make some strong arguments. It's a bit all over though so it is hard to follow. Instead take just one spot from your life and then relate how the Bible helped you through that time or it wasn't as bad as we thought. By doing that, you could turn this essay into a fun analogy. Most important, God will use your words to touch others. Keep writing. Don't get discouraged.
Being where we are today is where we need to be so God can lead us to where he wants us to be tomorrow.

We not only need to know this but emotional feel this so we don't waste this day.
03/18/17
You had a good beginning and some really good questions to answer. It is a shame that so many want to wish their youth away. This might be because they really don't have a good childhood to remember. You have the ability to encourage young people to cherish the state they are in. Keep writing and improving your skills. You have the passion. God Bless.